In my essay I am looking back to the rubric and I need a way to write a conclusion that keeps the reader thinking but also to make my point known. My goals are to fix up my paragraphs and find a closing statement. I will accomplish these goals by rereading my essay and listening to my essay to see if it makes sense. I will next go to my peer review and take their input on my essay and try ways to fix it. I need to write a conclusion but I need to find a way to word it. I want to connect the authors more to back up my thesis. The part that will be a challenge for me would be going back and rewording my work and creating a conclusion. If the challenge is difficult I would go back to my peer review person and get a second opinion. The next step would be talking to a friend or talking to my professor. I want to make sure my essay makes sense and proves what I want to state and voice my opinion. The reason I want to make my essay stronger is to state how much things are changing and how we can be more open minded and that’s my goal.Â
